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Tarnished.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 08:05:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Retrogression, reverse progression
You leave a bad taste in my mouth, but Im sure I dont make the best first impression
Cold? No, simply untoldunspoken
Watching you trying to break a lock thats already broken
But its clear to see that paying closer attention might help ease the tension of you and the apprehension of me
Now plant the seed and let it be
You be the concrete and Ill be the shadow, together well watch that lonely rose grow
Creating something from nothing and then turning it into everything
Im a little bit rusty but just dust me off and trust me
Especially on this
Like a razorblade kiss Ill cut through the typical behavior of the rest and build a home around the hole in your chest Center stage like the ribs of this cage
Starving for one who can simply understand what the hell Im trying to say
Because the fundamentals of my existence arent that complicated
Just hard to say.
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Re: Tarnished.
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 10:10:54 AM AEST
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| I really like the metaphors you brought forth in this poem: the razorblade, the cement, the hole in the chest etc. I think you gave each one just the right amount of development. Very good read, five stars!! |
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