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putting on a show
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 03:16:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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sheer bliss, within a kiss
the agony i know, I must let go
the slightest brush, your eyes they hide
it's me your yearning.
my heart is burning.
this kiss means more to me than I can show
witnesses, they see polite embrace
forbidden is this love. I can't replace,
Nor can I revisit.
Gone, in all but memory.
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2011-07-12 15:16:36]
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Re: putting on a show
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 13th July 2011 @ 08:57:43 AM AEST
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Forbidden love is quite appealing I must admit. You have brought out the many thoughts and emotions of a victim of such a love. Thank you for this post,
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