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Dark skies
Contributed by
Bigj
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Thursday, 14th July 2011 @ 04:56:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Clouds begin to cluster
Bursting with rain
The lightning crackles
The drops representing pain
For it's abundant
Flooding the roads
Every path I take
Until there is nowhere to go.
The storm doesn't move
It sits above me
Lightning brightens the dark
Revealing what I don't wanna see
The wind is gusting
My house is my heart
Being torn to pieces
Ripped apart
I sit exposed
The damage takes a toll
Destroying all within
Unable to regain what it stole
Written by: Justin Ford
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Bigj
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2011-07-14 04:56:23]
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Re: Dark skies
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 02:15:57 PM AEST
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This passage is rife with astounding metaphores
honestly this write is amazing, so well scripted
you have a natural talent for this, words fail me in expressing
how blown away i am, completley and thoroughly an impressive piece
I mean that with my every fiber, well done!
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