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For the both of you
Contributed by
pat346
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Thursday, 14th July 2011 @ 08:53:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A second chance, underserving but given sliced by the knife of apology, i'm sickened Countless mistakes and countless retakes in a relationship that makes me shake
I'm sorry if you ever felt like I could live with someone else I'm trying and God I wish I could I'm sorry if you didn't know how it felt to let you go and I swore to God I never would
but you didn't swear to ***** instead you made me sick.
A perfect chance, a face clouded by mist smiling and waiting for a meaningless kiss Countless lies she fed me and countless times she led me on
I'm sorry if you ever felt like I could live with someone else I'm trying and God I wish I could I'm sorry if you didn't know how it felt to let you go and I swore to God I never would
but you didn't swear to ***** instead you made me sick.
Would it have mattered if I ever changed and kissed you in that makeshift rain or would you still have got on that plane and booked it?
You said your so sorry for what you did but do you understand, they'll never give what I could have given you if you had let me because no one could ever love you as much as me, that's for sure...it's ***** impossible
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Re: For the both of you
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 14th July 2011 @ 08:59:37 PM AEST (User
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Very thought provoking.
Good writing.
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Re: For the both of you
(User Rating: 1 ) by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 01:58:15 PM AEST (User
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Usually this isn't my kind of flick but it was so real, so raw with emotion I could see the images of the rain, the plane and I believed you when you crowned your love king compered to the rest,I felt like i was in your shoes a profoundly stirring passage I must admit it got to me
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