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Array ( [sid] => 169953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Hole [time] => 2012-01-05 12:47:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I知 meticulous in my detail, I知 particular with my words,
I知 secular with my actions, I知 reckless with a cause,
I知 instigating the responses, I知 investigating your wears,
I知 breaking back the ties that bind, I知 ignorant to the stares,


And when the stars collide the cosmos weeps,
When our nature replies the universe speaks,
When the candle light dies, our souls come into view,
When angles take flight, I知 all alone with you,


I知 falling in the black hole, but it痴 all I致e ever wanted,
Fall with me into the nothingness, where uncharted souls become less daunted,
I値l take control, you will take everything I致e got,
Suns will die in our eyes, not even the heavens can make it stop,


Exploding in a super nova, obliteration fills the sky,
Reinstated in the climax, we are born as we die,


I dare not fight confusion, my mind filled by dark pollution, my better self finds collusion, in it痴 own reflected delusion,


Tick tock, and it stops, the pulse of times demise,
A beat so still, a sound so quiet, a look of great surprise,
But we knew it was coming, it was to be expected, and not to be denied,
The heat will warm us all, the cold will find the shadow by your side.


I知 spectacular in my judgement, I知 practical with my thoughts,
I知 revolutionary with my ideals, I知 ingenious when I talk,
I知 gentle with my linguistics, I知 sentimental in my moves,
I知 tipping the scenery of the world, I知 comfortable in the groove,


And when the comet hits, the fire does blaze,
When the sonnet fits, the warmth can amaze,
When gravity lifts, we can soar high above the plume,
When your focus shifts, the universe pours into the room,


I知 slipping from reality, but it痴 all I致e ever needed,
Come with me where nothing matters, a place where our hungers are depleted,
I値l put it all away, I値l place it anywhere you ask,
When the stars set fire to the night, not even the heavens can take it back,


Statements of natural science, indulging in the pleasure of creation,
Reactions of the giants, we lie unaware of their presentation,


I do not hesitate in the moment, I take comfort in the torment, my inner monster does lay dormant, when I loose sight of what痴 important,


Tick tock, and it stops, the pulse of times demise,
A beat so still, a sound so quiet, a look of great surprise,
But we knew it was coming, it was to be expected, and not to be denied,
The heat will warm us all, the cold will find the shadow by your side.


Tick tock, and it stops... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 2 [informant] => The_Lugubrious_Optimist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Black Hole

Contributed by The_Lugubrious_Optimist on Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 12:47:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I知 meticulous in my detail, I知 particular with my words,
I知 secular with my actions, I知 reckless with a cause,
I知 instigating the responses, I知 investigating your wears,
I知 breaking back the ties that bind, I知 ignorant to the stares,


And when the stars collide the cosmos weeps,
When our nature replies the universe speaks,
When the candle light dies, our souls come into view,
When angles take flight, I知 all alone with you,


I知 falling in the black hole, but it痴 all I致e ever wanted,
Fall with me into the nothingness, where uncharted souls become less daunted,
I値l take control, you will take everything I致e got,
Suns will die in our eyes, not even the heavens can make it stop,


Exploding in a super nova, obliteration fills the sky,
Reinstated in the climax, we are born as we die,


I dare not fight confusion, my mind filled by dark pollution, my better self finds collusion, in it痴 own reflected delusion,


Tick tock, and it stops, the pulse of times demise,
A beat so still, a sound so quiet, a look of great surprise,
But we knew it was coming, it was to be expected, and not to be denied,
The heat will warm us all, the cold will find the shadow by your side.


I知 spectacular in my judgement, I知 practical with my thoughts,
I知 revolutionary with my ideals, I知 ingenious when I talk,
I知 gentle with my linguistics, I知 sentimental in my moves,
I知 tipping the scenery of the world, I知 comfortable in the groove,


And when the comet hits, the fire does blaze,
When the sonnet fits, the warmth can amaze,
When gravity lifts, we can soar high above the plume,
When your focus shifts, the universe pours into the room,


I知 slipping from reality, but it痴 all I致e ever needed,
Come with me where nothing matters, a place where our hungers are depleted,
I値l put it all away, I値l place it anywhere you ask,
When the stars set fire to the night, not even the heavens can take it back,


Statements of natural science, indulging in the pleasure of creation,
Reactions of the giants, we lie unaware of their presentation,


I do not hesitate in the moment, I take comfort in the torment, my inner monster does lay dormant, when I loose sight of what痴 important,


Tick tock, and it stops, the pulse of times demise,
A beat so still, a sound so quiet, a look of great surprise,
But we knew it was coming, it was to be expected, and not to be denied,
The heat will warm us all, the cold will find the shadow by your side.


Tick tock, and it stops...




Copyright ツゥ The_Lugubrious_Optimist ... [ 2012-01-05 12:47:25]
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Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Thursday, 5th January 2012 @ 05:08:28 PM AEST
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Wow, really well put together. If I were you, I'd consider either recording it or doing a live open mic.

Though on line 23, I am not sure if you meant "grove" or "groove" - maybe a typo?

Anyway, applause from these quarters!




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