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THE CALL
Contributed by
hray42
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Tuesday, 6th March 2012 @ 09:55:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i am hungry, the hunger in deep a hunger to make the strongest eyes weep i am thirsty, a thirst that needs quenched a thirst that causes my fists to be clenched will i remain here without being fulfilled will i never get that which is willed my heart sits here empty like a cage one that once held an animal in rage my soul mopes like a figure of gaunt it is this lonely room that i shall haunt with each hours passing, so do i pass leaves me to wonder how long this will last for i am empty and alone in this place my head dizzy, my mind in a race in this corner a lay in a huddled heap as death from under the floor does creep it is here to enslave, and take me away i am sad 'cause i really had hoped to stay but the life in me hangs by a single thread i am inches away from what we all dread as i slip into that awaiting realm as death takes control, takes hold of my helm i am steered into the starkest of realities my demise has been slow, an awful calamity goodbye cruel world, goodbye all i must answer to death, answer it's call...
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Re: THE CALL
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th March 2012 @ 11:13:20 PM AEST (User
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This is heart breaking to read.
I hope it is just writing and you are not thinking about suicide.:(
For people who have been on this site along time this will be the broken record part, but I will repeat it again........
I have been on the other end of suicide..... the one left behind, more than once.
I can tell you that it is one of the worst things to LIVE with....... There is a question, there is a loss and a hole that only partially fills over. Time, months, years, it doesnt fully go away.
enough said here.....
The poem is well written and very emotional. I feel it and I understand those feelings. I have learned when there seems nothing left, you need to fight your way through it, whatever it is........ make yourself get up, get moving, write, exercise, smile even if you are crying. Trials seem to linger forever but you know what? You are NEVER alone........ and it all will pass, and you find a new calm, strength......... and you can do it!!!!!!!!! I hope this helps.
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Michelle |
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