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30 Seconds.
Contributed by
Bleedthelove
on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 03:32:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I feel sick
You want a poem or raw emotion?
11 years of pure devotion
This is freestyle
30 second *****
Peel back the skin
Reach within
Pull your heart out and let it bleed onto the screen
Another sick attempt to make you understand what I'm feeling
Staring at a ceiling inside a room in which I never sleep
Too busy weeping and crying
Because my mom lays awake every night thinking about her kids and grand kids and the fact that she's slowly dying
I dunno why I'm in love with you
11 years without an answer
Yes I got drunk...said hateful things...
All because my mom was diagnosed with breast cancer
So hate me forever
That's ok
I should know better, be more
Mindful of things I say
But you treat me like a no name nobody, eventho I love you more now than I did yesterday
And that's the case every day
I'm not crazy and I'm definately not insane
Just a little bit older and a lot wiser from the pain
I hate my brain
I hate my mouth even more for the ***** I can't explain
I cause pain when all I do is love
I was never baptized and I'm thankful...
Because I truly believe there's no
"god" above
If there was you would understand....that I've loved you since the very day and second you touched my hand....and looked at me like you knew all my sins that I carried within...and somehow loved me anyways....You looked at me like it was perfectly ok to be not perfect at all.
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2012-10-28 15:32:26]
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Re: 30 Seconds.
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by Savannah1085 on
Tuesday, 30th October 2012 @ 02:56:23 PM AEST
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| This poem...I connect to it very well. My aunt has breast cancer. I feel you... Good way to express your feelings, and great eye-catching title. I really enjoyed it. Definatly NOT a waste of my time. (: |
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