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Oh love so fair
Contributed by
VRR
on
Sunday, 21st April 2013 @ 02:49:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like two strings macramted with each other
Over the aurora of 'em starry skies
Vanquishing the nonplus of the first sight of us, each other
Existing always together as one beneath the starry skies.
Like the the boots that kiss the earth
Overtly living, but indispensable when together
Vandalising the evil to let life be as free and pure as earth
Echoing through the lands is the erstwhile and henceforth emotion of love when together.
Living life sans he other is unanticipated terror
Over the limit horror it is
Very much unexistant I am without you
Equal to a nodding noddle I am.
It is impossible to think the world without the pair
It is love for the pair, oh partner so fair.
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VRR
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2013-04-21 02:49:23]
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Re: Oh love so fair
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by karu on
Sunday, 21st April 2013 @ 04:53:45 AM AEST
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| last 2 lines are so meaningful |
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Re: Oh love so fair
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by sayedthangal on
Sunday, 21st April 2013 @ 10:37:18 AM AEST
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| Good poem, every thing in the world is created by God as pairs, we can't cut it out , as we are also part of it, no world without pair , well done. |
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Re: Oh love so fair
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by Sagefairy on
Sunday, 21st April 2013 @ 04:48:34 PM AEST
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"Sans THE other"... ? :-)
But yes, unanticipated terror is a remarkably good description of what happens...
"nodding noodle"? ah yes.
Very nicely done - very different than the usual love poem. Blessings, SF |
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Re: Oh love so fair
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by ArdRi79 on
Sunday, 21st April 2013 @ 08:15:24 PM AEST
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Thats a joy to read :)
And nodding noodle gave me a good laugh too. Thanks. |
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