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PEACEFUL VISTAS
Contributed by
vrr
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Friday, 7th March 2014 @ 05:49:07 AM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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Its not history
Its eternity relived.
Its peace flying
In the unequivocal past which has bled.
Its the dove gliding
Cleansing sardonic roads it crosses.
Its that tyranny ending
By the words of his fellow reflection, man.
In the fast pace of life,
And grave civil strife,
The gong sounds the onset of a new, bright day,
And my heart, only here it wants to stay.
Its not history,
Its eternity relived.
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Re: PEACEFUL VISTAS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Friday, 7th March 2014 @ 11:51:09 AM AEST (User
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Dude, or Dudette! This is awesome! I love it..."It’s not history, It’s eternity relived."
You should (if not already) marry your poetic flair to your obvious state of awareness of an activist flavour- write of the true state of the world. If you go to "Our Respective Journey's into the valley of..." one of my pieces will appear. It's about awareness....you seem cool.
Enjoy life and I'll look for more.
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Re: PEACEFUL VISTAS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sagefairy on
Monday, 10th March 2014 @ 12:14:23 AM AEST (User
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It is THAT which I try to seek out at least once a week; a peaceful vista. Where I can imagine that my eyes will still be looking there eons from now, assuming it still exists. Eternity relived, I like. That is the part I will most remember. Very good!
Blessings, SF |
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