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Please don't
Contributed by
drone
on
Sunday, 18th January 2015 @ 08:49:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Please don't
Please don't break
what you fail
to understand
Please don't
Please don't make
Pain
for the little one
who shakes
in the corner
Whimpering
like a wounded animal
Stareing
wide eyed
In fear
at your hand
Copyright ©
drone
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2015-01-18 08:49:45]
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Re: Please don't
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2015 @ 05:35:48 AM AEST
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This poem seems fragile, but robustly deals its subject. It's quite beautifully done really.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Please don't
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by kmec1990 on
Monday, 19th January 2015 @ 07:54:03 PM AEST
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Once again to manage to say much with few words. A message for all to hear, well done!
K |
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Re: Please don't
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by Archie on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 05:13:26 AM AEST
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| This poem can be taken in a lot of ways. It strikes a chord with me due to my childhood. In this poem you achieve a very emotive style. |
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