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Miles of Love
Contributed by
Jennifer_Craig
on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 10:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Youre with me when I wake up And when I brush out my hair I can feel your presence with me Even when you arent there
When I head to work Im stressed out But youre there to calm my nerves In the crazy days I have there Youre the peace that I deserve
Just a simple call reminds me As your voice brings me to melt How I always feel my safest Playing out the card were dealt
Though your body isnt present I can feel you with my heart Lying down in bed I smile Youve been with me from the start!
--- Written based on her experience on long distance relationship.
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Jennifer_Craig
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2015-02-02 10:37:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Miles of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 04:29:16 PM AEST (User
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"In the crazy days I have there
You’re the peace that I deserve"
Perfection. Well done.
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Re: Miles of Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 04:33:59 PM AEST (User
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Soothing as a gentle stream trickling down the mountainside.
One of those poems that make you let out a contented sigh at the end.
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