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Scrolling
Contributed by
drone
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Tuesday, 10th June 2025 @ 02:45:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Is one still looking
Attached
To all that
Psychological
Pain and Grief
Of Memory's Past
While Continously Scrolling
On the Currpted Web
Taking Pills
That make No Sense
For the Reasons Why
Trying to Outsmart
Your Own Denial
On Why it's Not Normal
Have to Look
On your Own
Deep Inside
Where one's Shadows Wait
With a Smile For You To Try
To Light one's Candle
That Will Bring the Light
Where Reality
Will Show You
Why
Copyright ©
drone
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2025-06-10 02:45:19]
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Re: Scrolling
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th May 2015 @ 11:09:37 AM AEST
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That had to suck and had to be scary. I can only imagine the heart attack part.
I don't have to imagine being ***** over like that. Been there, done that, as they say.
At least life makes us write and that is a good thing.
Sorry you had to go through that but glad to see a new write. Nicely done.
Tim |
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Re: Scrolling
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by softerware on
Sunday, 10th May 2015 @ 11:13:31 AM AEST
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A story of a free warning! We all get them--we don't all pay attention as you have!
I feel opportunity in your words; you are the architect.
Until we change what we want; we keep getting the same thing, over and over.
I look forward to your recovery, body and spirit.
There is nothing to keep you where you stand.
My favorite line is "It was all about you and never me." How can we know in advance!?
Test before you invest. Down-sell yourself --Make every mistake you can think of, and when the dust settles, see who is still beside you. She will be worth having. Keep writing!
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Re: Scrolling
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 10th May 2015 @ 10:00:56 PM AEST
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I am sorry you had to endure all that. I am very happy you are OK and healthy now, and writing,
god bless you! |
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Re: Scrolling
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 10th May 2015 @ 11:04:49 PM AEST
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so heartbreakingly sad! i'm so happy you are with us still,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Scrolling
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by speedy on
Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 09:04:08 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. My father is a heart attack survivor as well. He was 43 at the time & he just turned 60.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Scrolling
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 21st July 2015 @ 06:58:39 PM AEST
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You just can't trust people. Man.
Fox |
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Re: Scrolling
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th March 2019 @ 07:12:30 AM AEST
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// Ooooh. I definitely remember this one now. Geeze, it/'/s heart breaking!!!
I/'/m glad you/'/re still alive and kicking. I/'/m glad to know you. Powerful poem. Those last two lines? That could be me speaking. You/'/re a comrade in arms.
Take care, Jimmy.
Timmy
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