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Array ( [sid] => 181660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Caged [time] => 2015-08-26 03:44:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Pacing back and forth
You've turned me into an animal
Locked inside a cage
Staring eagerly between bars

I love you when you remember to feed me
Your tall tales of love
Remember all the times you left me here to die
Remember every time I had to put on a show for you
You know I hate it when you lie to me
Remember all those nice things that you said to me
Remember when I was screaming in my head
No

Find the key you buried in a hole
Next to the grave of who I used to be
It's a shame to be locked up with all of this air to breathe
Let me shed myself of you
Let me grow new skin
Maybe when I'm free and new
I can finally be with you
But
I can't exist inside a cage for you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => Edited as requested for spelling ~ Moderator_18 Aug 26, 2015 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Caged

Contributed by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 26th August 2015 @ 03:44:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Pacing back and forth
You've turned me into an animal
Locked inside a cage
Staring eagerly between bars

I love you when you remember to feed me
Your tall tales of love
Remember all the times you left me here to die
Remember every time I had to put on a show for you
You know I hate it when you lie to me
Remember all those nice things that you said to me
Remember when I was screaming in my head
No

Find the key you buried in a hole
Next to the grave of who I used to be
It's a shame to be locked up with all of this air to breathe
Let me shed myself of you
Let me grow new skin
Maybe when I'm free and new
I can finally be with you
But
I can't exist inside a cage for you




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2015-08-26 03:44:44]
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Re: Caged (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 26th August 2015 @ 04:38:47 AM AEST
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This is very deep and the sentiment seems to be of a love that has died or one filled with abuse. In either case it is well written


Re: Caged (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 26th August 2015 @ 02:47:03 PM AEST
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I have no words other than you did an excellent job expressing what this feeling is like.


Emotive piece. Well done.



~Scorp


Re: Caged (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Friday, 5th August 2016 @ 01:35:44 AM AEST
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Very deep and personal :)




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