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Garden of Eden
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Tuesday, 5th July 2016 @ 10:27:30 PM in AEST
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"Only the pure in heart can make a good soup."
-Ludwig Van Beethoven
Fragmented garden
Straighten the bends and cracks
Through force and mighty fist
The sun is strained
Weeping o/'/er film below
Evolution, ended much too soon
Luna would fade away
Within a day she lost her hue;
Christened in the blood and dew
Natural tears
They can/'/t be held back
Evergreen blood and maples tapped
Gleaming droplets
Perspired in the sky
From a flattened goblet black
Gaia called
Sprouts and blossoms towered high
Children spawned, from the rivers/'/ awe
Impending squall
Bringing hellish spite and rain
So came defenders, to siphon holy pain
Glowing stones
Struck with sleight of hand
All that remained were heavy shifting sands
Left standing there
One was then to till
Much to do, to forge your world anew
I thank you now
For all you/'/ve done
Spread your wings, swim into the sky
Goodbye, goodbye
Please don/'/t take too long
Return to her, once you/'/ve touched the sun
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Re: Garden of Eden
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2016 @ 12:02:32 AM AEST
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Is someone going to recite this on next season/'/s Game of Thrones? That/'/s one of the feelings I got from this. Another one for history, Mark. Me really likes.
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Re: Garden of Eden
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th July 2016 @ 11:11:57 PM AEST
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i find this enchanting, beautifully penned,
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Garden of Eden
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 7th July 2016 @ 01:45:34 AM AEST
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I really dig this Mark! Very well done. been a bit since I read you and darn glad I did, my friend.
Invierno |
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Re: Garden of Eden
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 10:18:29 AM AEST
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I like your voice here. Bravo.
~Scorp |
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