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thanks for poem
Contributed by
mick
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Thursday, 16th January 2025 @ 07:47:41 AM in AEST
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I am happy to see you working great
Copyright ©
mick
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2025-01-16 07:47:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: thanks for poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 9th October 2017 @ 05:54:13 PM AEST (User
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What a great flow and superb word choices.
This was flawless and actually a fun joyful read which may seem weird but it was not a sad at all.
How about "frisky" lol!
Loved it! |
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Re: thanks for poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 10th October 2017 @ 12:43:36 AM AEST (User
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I really like the way this flowed
keep diving deep.... |
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Re: thanks for poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 10th October 2017 @ 08:36:16 PM AEST (User
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Why do I want a cigarette?
This left me out of breath. So many great phrases and expressions! WHAT ID DO TO BE THAT MOONLIGHT POURING OVER YOUR SPRAWL.
Smooth rhythm and gait, paced so deftly that the poor reader can never quite catch their breath until the finale!
Exhilarating and vivid.Almost impossible to be seductive and ladylike at the same time--you have succeeded. Software |
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Re: thanks for poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2017 @ 01:45:51 AM AEST (User
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let loose
sitting all the while
just an excuse
to explore
more than wild
to implore
a vividness
seems like such
an unholy experience
that is truly
holy, because it is
skin is never simple
the being inside
is complex
no matter how deep
one thinks they travel
they awake side by side
their warmth
feels real
like nothing else
ever could
could it last
carry them forth
in an uneven world
I think it could
It has happened
before
MoonlitAngel
you seem to write
here
Peace! |
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Re: thanks for poem
(User Rating: 0 ) by mick on
Thursday, 16th January 2025 @ 08:58:26 PM AEST (User
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great poem |
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