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BUild tHAt wALl !!!

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 26th June 2018 @ 10:49:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



A composition of prose
The consortium arose
Clapped and cheered
Took a deep breath
Then listened carefully to the question posed

To what do we owe
This honor
To whom are we sold
Why have we let down our armor
And left our bodies fully exposed
Naked
Awakened
While the battle wages fiercely
self admonishment grows
When can we forgive ourselves
for things we can no longer control

A God of the gaps
Explores the existential trap
Fine tuning the cosmos
Sending a charge through the synapse
An evolutionary relapse
A regression
A suggestion
Back to the basics
while keeping the core thesis intact
If the seam should snap
The societal fabric and its antithetical warriors will surely attack
Your freedom to think
Has freely been snatched
All your belongings meticulously packed
While your eyes were closed
The theft of your soul
Was extorted
Manipulated
Desecrated
Then handed right back
Enjoy

What will you do
With your redemption
An exemption
From
Depression
A second chance
Will you impart wisdom
Pass judgement
Or enjoy the slow dance
Will you dip your feet in the ocean
Wave your fingers through the endless sand
Come to a resolution
A realization
That you are human
You are worthy
Of life
Of love
Of sex
Of happiness
Without which
You might as well be dead
Enjoy








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Re: BUild tHAt wALl !!! (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 27th June 2018 @ 12:37:15 AM AEST
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Yes indeed, we are what we do. If we do nothing our existence is a waste.
Your write begs the question: what shall you be?
I can only answer for me.
softerware


Re: BUild tHAt wALl !!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st July 2018 @ 02:12:08 AM AEST
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back to the basics -
where there is plenty to think about
- and so simple / one would
be so righteous only to share.

This reminds me of all the spaces
around the world, the blue planet

and all of its thoughtful and humane
inhabitant - the multitudes with
no name
Peace!


Re: BUild tHAt wALl !!! (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 1st July 2018 @ 05:35:48 PM AEST
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Took you long enough ... welcome back.


Happy Canada day :)


~Scorp


Re: BUild tHAt wALl !!! (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 3rd July 2018 @ 01:15:49 AM AEST
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Love this! Revolution is my take.

ming




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