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More of My Kind
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Monday, 31st December 2018 @ 03:59:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In an attempt to be defined
I searched for more of my kind
Solely cause I was so inclined
What I found was more of the same
It*s okay to just go with the flow
You just may meet someone you didn*t already know
Roll with the punches
Cause when you go it alone
They do come in bunches
I left a world of seclusion
For a world of total delusion
I walked many places
Staring at all of those strange faces
I met a girl in the city
Boy was she so pretty
She got blood from a stone
All on her own
When she left, I prayed over the throne
Before the end
I was already on the mend
Hip hop, tick tock,
Now it*s time to hide under a rock
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2018-12-31 15:59:41]
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Re: More of My Kind
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by Zaf_Stud on
Monday, 31st December 2018 @ 08:49:39 PM AEST
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An honest expression of a real feeling.
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Re: More of My Kind
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by softerware on
Monday, 31st December 2018 @ 09:23:51 PM AEST
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Being unique isn/'/t all its cracked up to be. Your poem gives us a chance to learn from others mistakes...but we tend to want to make our own!
I love the last two lines! They sign the ending of the poem with a whimsical flourish, and the author leaves the stage.
Nice job James.
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Re: More of My Kind
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 1st January 2019 @ 04:28:08 AM AEST
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Reading this made me smile
Btw I don/'/t think this was nonsense - I liked it.
Great write.
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Re: More of My Kind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2020 @ 04:45:50 AM AEST
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//// Oh wow, how cool is this? The only nonsense I see here is you thinking it`s nonsense. Horse hockey!!! This thing rocks.
Gonna read it again before I move on to the next one.
Thank you,
Timmy Dugan
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