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Crackers
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 3rd March 2019 @ 07:44:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Were infected. Misdirected.
After reading I suspected...
Connections have come disconnected!
Crazy dreams, boy band schemes.
Nobody is what they seem!
I want to play, cant get away...I’m stuck with logic, eating hay.
Wish I could dream and fly, but why?
So turn around and wave goodby.
Play your sport; I’ll just report.
Someone has to hold the fort.
Hope you come back to play again.
I’ll be here. That YOU Sir Tim?
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softerware
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2019-03-03 07:44:01]
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Re: Crackers
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 3rd March 2019 @ 10:55:39 AM AEST
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Wow Jaye is a rappin* instead of slappin* what a cool jewel you is.. You be alright....
This was great Jaye. Very playful and fun with a great flow too. Word!!!
What a fine soul you are!!!! No stuff shirt here!!!
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Re: Crackers
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 12:27:52 AM AEST
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| i love the concept. this is epic. it reminds me of old childhood friends or even like middle school friends. |
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Re: Crackers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 09:43:38 AM AEST
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That be me. That last line surprised me but a little after the half way mark I was thinking of me. Is that conceited?
I love this and not just because I`m mentioned. I always love your writing!
Thank you, Softy. Thank you very much.
Sir Tim
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Re: Crackers
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 5th March 2019 @ 02:23:04 PM AEST
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Of friends that have lost touch and since have reconnected. I have a number of friendships that
have followed this path but sadly havent had the
chance to catchup.
Yet again another brilliant write.
There has yet to be a piece of yours that I have not
liked :))
Rich |
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Re: Crackers
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 6th March 2019 @ 01:11:49 AM AEST
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I admire your fearless candor.....
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