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Living bravely
Contributed by
softerware
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Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 03:55:09 AM in AEST
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Make mistakes remembering,
That time will undo anything.
Youll live to see the world forget.
So hunt your dreams without regrets.
Perfection writes your script her way.
Like a suit thats ready made.
Prescription living unromanced
By architects of circumstance.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2019-03-19 03:55:09]
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Re: Living bravely
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 01:15:52 PM AEST
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This sounds like something that I would write except
in fewer words :)
Time may heal anything but I dont know of much
that can aid in helping us forget. I have a hard time
doing anything without taking into consideration
what the consequences could be for those dreams.
Perfection will write the script her way fighting the
spontaneity of life the whole way. Humans want to
strive for our version of perfection which always goes
against the effortless flow of God/'/s will which goes
to show that we make our pains in life way worse
than they have to be.
Just the way I see it :)
Rich |
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Re: Living bravely
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 03:39:19 PM AEST
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A great tongue twister here.
The last stanza was glorious.
So little yet so much. |
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Re: Living bravely
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 21st March 2019 @ 01:30:23 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom I/'/ll need to adhere to.
I/'/ve gone a vast majority of my life in the opposite fashion, so convincing myself to change is difficult. I/'/ve also noticed sometimes I have to get outside of my head and that is //HARD//. It/'/s causing me new difficulties at my new factory job because my mind is adventerous and likes to wander!
Well done as always Jaye :) |
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Re: Living bravely
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 21st March 2019 @ 01:30:25 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom I/'/ll need to adhere to.
I/'/ve gone a vast majority of my life in the opposite fashion, so convincing myself to change is difficult. I/'/ve also noticed sometimes I have to get outside of my head and that is //HARD//. It/'/s causing me new difficulties at my new factory job because my mind is adventerous and likes to wander!
Well done as always Jaye :) |
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Re: Living bravely
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 21st March 2019 @ 11:56:13 PM AEST
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Such wisdom in this concise poetic gem. You, my dear lady, are one hell of a poet.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Living bravely
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd March 2019 @ 11:12:16 AM AEST
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you have to be a good waitress at the coney island
and then you got to be something special
something strong
something nobody knows and nobody will tell
you they understand, at least for a long time
while you work your way through
on your own
You are a woman
You were all this time alive.
Peace! |
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