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Surfing The Waves
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 03:33:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Surfing the waves of chronic dismay
Holding out hope for a better day
My long lost love has reappeared
Now it`s time for me to disappear
Our time came and went
Love has long been gone
Nothing there to reinvent
I hold out no hope
Living in reality
Has helped me to cope
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2019-03-19 15:33:12]
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Re: Surfing The Waves
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 04:55:15 PM AEST
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Ive come to realize that those "waves" are usually
just giant rolling swells.
"My long lost love has reappeared.
Now its time for me to disappear"
They always show up at the most inopportune times
and our "Exit Stage Right" always is blocked by one
thing or another. Our disappearing acts are always
thwarted. Reality always tend to remove the "rose
colored glasses" of love and reveal its true colors.
Not saying that love is an enemy just more of a "ball
and chain" that helps direct us into adulthood.
Ive come to notice that you and Jaye can say more in
fewer words than I can (lol)
Great piece my friend
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Re: Surfing The Waves
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 20th March 2019 @ 03:19:43 AM AEST
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How nice to be mentioned in such esteemed company.
When confronted with an old love that was gut wrenching to extricate from our lives....RUN!
Your poem reminds me of such a person...I had no control. My only hope was to exit and quickly.
Sometimes that is the best plan when logic fails to serve us. And as you conclude...the best we can do is cope.
Well said James. You read my mind.
softerware
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Re: Surfing The Waves
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd March 2019 @ 11:05:48 AM AEST
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I play the guitar, and I draw with charcoal
upon a pastel paper that holds, and not because
anything I ever do is ever good enough to hold onto.
I guess I just don/'/t care enough like I should.
I guess it is the cold blood that runs through my soul,
that helps me forget and helps me live.
I am tough for my friends.
Peace!
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Re: Surfing The Waves
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2020 @ 05:17:53 AM AEST
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//This person is a pessimist. That person is an optimist. I`m a realist so I can really relate to "living in reality
Has helped me to cope"
Thank you for that. Thanks for this poem.
tkd
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