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Motionless
The trees sway not in the autumn breeze
Today is different
Scarier than all that preceded
How can I ever be reassured?
These words
How absurd

Tranquil
Not a moment passes
Smiles are not wasted
When every moment
Resembles perfection

Entangled particles
Dependent on chance
Deterministic
Free will
Rendered useless
Minds blended
Entranced
One can dream
Wish
Feckless nonsense
Enhanced

Light permeates
Photons dissipate
Relativity propagates
In a dream
Space and time
Deviate
A future left to the young
The old wave goodbye

Stare up
The universe passes
Expanding
Everlasting
Into a vacuum of thought

Without understanding
I leap
Forward
Not for myself
But for the fresh
New faces

They sing goodnight
Wish me sweet dreams
With a kiss
Magic
They know I love them
Even if I can not save them from themselves
They will realize
I tried

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Idiot

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Monday, 20th April 2020 @ 11:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Mania
Motionless
The trees sway not in the autumn breeze
Today is different
Scarier than all that preceded
How can I ever be reassured?
These words
How absurd

Tranquil
Not a moment passes
Smiles are not wasted
When every moment
Resembles perfection

Entangled particles
Dependent on chance
Deterministic
Free will
Rendered useless
Minds blended
Entranced
One can dream
Wish
Feckless nonsense
Enhanced

Light permeates
Photons dissipate
Relativity propagates
In a dream
Space and time
Deviate
A future left to the young
The old wave goodbye

Stare up
The universe passes
Expanding
Everlasting
Into a vacuum of thought

Without understanding
I leap
Forward
Not for myself
But for the fresh
New faces

They sing goodnight
Wish me sweet dreams
With a kiss
Magic
They know I love them
Even if I can not save them from themselves
They will realize
I tried

____________
___




Copyright © Jyssvw22 ... [ 2020-04-20 23:06:21]
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Re: Idiot (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 23rd April 2020 @ 01:52:38 AM AEST
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well done
I liked this flow....


Re: Idiot (User Rating: 1 )
by TheNugget on Sunday, 26th April 2020 @ 12:10:10 AM AEST
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How many wrinkles?
Loads.
No oxygen.
Next!


Re: Idiot (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 10th September 2020 @ 01:12:02 PM AEST
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Magic it is indeed. Those fresh faces are an elixir against hopelessness.
Stay strong, stay safe.



~Scorp




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