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If He'd Been Here

Contributed by dvtpdw on Tuesday, 2nd July 2024 @ 06:19:46 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



If He'd Been Here

 

Would I have found wonders

Had he been here to guide

Or would I continue the blunders

I incurred if he had not died

 

What would he have taught me

Would he have spun great tales

To open my eyes to all I can be

Or scornfully watched all my fails

 

Truthfully the man was built on strife

He had demons eating away his soul

No matter what he did in his life

Darkness always demanded it's toll

 

Anger was the path often chosen

No give to his leeway of thought

Tho there were good memories woven

Interlaced into what the Universe brought

 

There is no hate or loss in my mind

I can't miss what wasn't meant to be

I just wonder what we would find

If he'd been here, just teaching me

 





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Re: If He'd Been Here (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 31st May 2020 @ 10:57:44 PM AEST
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This is what I said - not in those words, mind you. Eventually this virus will run its course. You can be concerned and worried, however there are other things going on in the world that are just as serious.

Great write.

Hannah B


Re: If He'd Been Here (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th June 2020 @ 09:41:32 AM AEST
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So true, they don/'/t have clean water to drink,
which is far worse than any influenza we all know.
And I do not know what a real poem is any more
if it does not speak to anyone, if they feel one day,
they themselves should have said the same thing,
but for some reason they never had.




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