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one day Iíll say the words
that you want to hear;
someday Iíll do the things
to take away your fears

but right now Iím not there
and donít know when Iíll be:
yet I know Iíll come around,
so donít give up on me,
donít give up on me.

one day Iíll right the wrongs
that caused you so much pain,
and try to dry the tears
so no one cries again

I just canít seem
to push away the
darker side, you see;
but donít give up on me,
please, donít give up on me.

there will come a time
when happiness will reign,
when love and hope will rise and rise
and spread their wings again.
until I shed my chains
and be who I can be,
donít give up on me
no, no, donít give up on me.


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 65 [informant] => spike [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Hold

Contributed by spike on Tuesday, 23rd June 2020 @ 02:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



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/


one day Iíll say the words
that you want to hear;
someday Iíll do the things
to take away your fears

but right now Iím not there
and donít know when Iíll be:
yet I know Iíll come around,
so donít give up on me,
donít give up on me.

one day Iíll right the wrongs
that caused you so much pain,
and try to dry the tears
so no one cries again

I just canít seem
to push away the
darker side, you see;
but donít give up on me,
please, donít give up on me.

there will come a time
when happiness will reign,
when love and hope will rise and rise
and spread their wings again.
until I shed my chains
and be who I can be,
donít give up on me
no, no, donít give up on me.






Copyright © spike ... [ 2020-06-23 02:08:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Hold (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 24th June 2020 @ 02:29:35 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B


Re: Hold (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th June 2020 @ 02:22:09 PM AEST
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This is great! It flowed so well it seemed like a song to me.

Thanks,

Dugan




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