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A Battle For Love
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:05:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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A bare-back rider I stood my ground Against the odds Foes all around
My weapon sang As it leapt out My gaze was strong No fear or doubt
The first attacker Was displaced A frightful grin Bewitched my face
A sword approached Its glare I saw Its one desire My blood to draw
My shield I raised The blow it held My sword flashed out The foe it felled
A wretched soul Impaled my mount He reared up Then fell to the ground
I rolled on the dirt Then got to my feet My sword in hand More foes to defeat
Though time was slow My mind was fast I knew how to block Each blow they cast
A spear that was thrown A spear that I caught It left my hand New foes it sought
The glint I saw Of a drawn blade I raised my shield The sword it stayed
I fought for a maiden They had taken my Dove I slew for a cause They had stolen my Love!
I blocked, I slashed I dodged, I slew In anger and wrath My sword, it flew
My bloody sword I then let fall For I had won I'd slain them all
My Love I found Alive and well I cried for joy For her I held
Her arm about me I held her tight I whispered "Love, 'Twas worth the fight
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-01-07 22:05:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:23:33 PM AEST (User
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David, you KNOW I hate that line, "a frightful grin". I told you not to put it in!!! Now everyone will think you're crazy. Sigh, They'll be right. |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:45:03 PM AEST (User
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as always, a beautiful work, even with a frightful grin! Love ya lots in the Lord |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:29:32 AM AEST (User
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Oh, come on Andrew. You know that is somebody took her I'd go crazy. Frightful, isn't it?
David
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:44:30 PM AEST (User
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David- Your my hero!
~Alicia |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:56:33 AM AEST (User
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Oh wow what a knight in shinning armour u are :) I loved the story the battle and the ending so sweet.
Well done,
Carmen |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by CarrieLynn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST (User
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oh wow... thats a beautiful poem... i loved it... |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:03:08 PM AEST (User
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nice rythem
nice flow
nice message
:) |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:32:34 PM AEST (User
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She must've smiled after you read her this poem. I hope things go well for the two of you. |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:14:15 PM AEST (User
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Wow that was very captivating :) |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by hollynicole on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST (User
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beautiful wonderful ending thats the kind of man every woman needs |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gigi_15 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST (User
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this is a very nice poetry. very good work...it's very sweet( i luv the ending) |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by BlindRomantic on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:37:29 AM AEST (User
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nice. |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by anitajames on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:42:02 AM AEST (User
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Aw, victory is sweet is it not. This reminds me of the old classic poems about knights and maidens and battles against evil. Lovely.
Ann |
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Re: A Battle For Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:59:27 PM AEST (User
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I love your poem...Am glad you found your love...God Bless! |
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