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Crashing Down

Contributed by stalkee on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 09:21:31 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Some days I just know,
that my whole worlds gonna come crashing down
And everythings gonna go straight to hell
Today's one of those days...

Crashing down,
my worlds come crashing down again
Crashing down,
I'm buried in all the debris

I'm at one of those points in life,
where I'm feeling pain and I'm feeling sorrow
The columns of my life are crumbling,
and my whole foundations shaking

Crashing down,
there's almost no hope to be found
Crashing down,
everything in my lifes getting dark




Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2004-02-23 21:21:31]
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Re: Crashing Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Thefairyecho on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:10:56 PM AEST
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your poem rock it really described real life emotions and very disterbing which is kinda kool ur not sceard 2 talk about what other pepole are sceard of!so talk back if u want we can tread pems and *****.

luv echo


Re: Crashing Down (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:39:34 AM AEST
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This is awesome! So ... dammit all to hell, the word I want won't come to me. *sigh* It really is one of those days. :P Great poem, keep your chin up!

~ Moonlit


Re: Crashing Down (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:54:06 AM AEST
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So full of anger. There is just too many days when I feel like my world comes crashing down, its like a constant feeling that I have. Awesome poem you got here.

~blueheart




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