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Beautiful
Contributed by
swiftsouljah
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Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:16:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Beautiful
A word you wont let me say
Even though it describes you in every way
Our time together
Is like no other
The time we spent
Ill never forget
Youll never know how much I cared
All you need to know is it aint fair
To keep these feelings on the hush
To never yell you
That I love you so much
To never tell you
That I love you so
That Ill hold you and never let you go
To never tell you
That youll always have a place in my heart
That I never want to ever see us part
To never tell you
Is a massive injustice
But I live my life like this
Its crashing to a soul
To love someonebut never be whole
It destroys a mans spirit
To love someonebut never show it
Its compressing to my being
To say, beautiful, I love you
But only when Im dreaming
Every word I bleed here is true
One last timeI love you
Each word written in stone
Every letter etched
Through the pain of being alone
Beautiful
Many thoughts of you my mind is stretched
Keeping these feelings inside me
Im so stressed
You know
But you act like you dont
When you ignore I get so depressed
A day without you
Is a day I dont want to live through
If you knew the depth of the love I felt
You would offer your hand and lend me some help
Am I here to be the victim of your play
If you only knew what it took
To get my pen to display
The horrors of my soul
That my mind cant even say
I could go out and find another girl
One thats nice and really cute too
But the love I give her
would have been meant for you
Beautiful
Any other girl not half as sweet
Wouldve already
Been swept off her feet
But you beautiful
Dont even care
About my heart
And the love I have for you there
More broken than ever
Its gonna take a lifetime
To put these pieces together
Of my broken heart
Look at this cycle
You gave it its start
By disguising how you feel
I wanna know all you wont tell
To know how you feel
And make sure youre doing well
When your not around
My lifes a living hell
Youll never know
The pain it took to write
in between these lines
The images of you that taunt my mind
To see you
Beautiful
And think
Youll never be mine
Cause everyday my love grows deeper
More and more I realize youre a keeper
Sometimes you seem to value my company
Other times you seem to barely notice me
A fly on the wall
A place in your heart
Which do I occupy
Catch me cause Im gonna fall
Head over heels for you
Beautiful
I love you forever and a day
Do you feel ungrateful
To be loved like this
And just turn and walk away
If you dont care
Then the words I say
Shouldnt bring a tear to your eye
If you dont care
Then the words I write
Shouldnt make you cry
Im not saying Im right
But this is how I feel
Every word I write
Lets you know Im for real
Every word I write
comes from the heart
Every word I write
Bu assured its true
Cause beautiful
Its all because of you.
Wayne Wende
Copyright ©
swiftsouljah
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2004-03-10 18:16:15]
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Re: Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:00:31 PM AEST
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| dear wayne, beautiful expression of feelings, very sweet, i hope you show it to her, warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Beautiful
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by satansfallenangel on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:26:49 PM AEST
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ohhhh that's so good... and really well-done. If it took that whole day it was worth it, at leasrt to me... good write.
*~Rebecca~* |
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Re: Beautiful
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by harshreality on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 08:23:28 PM AEST
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| I loved this. I can totally relate. Very rarely do you find a good poem that long. They usually start to lose their meaning towards the middle, but yours held through until the end. This guy once told me he knew I could have anyone I wanted. I responded with maybe. What I really wanted to say is then why not you? b/c I'll never love anyone the way I do you, I wish I would have had the courage to actually say that. I think were coming from a similiar place. And I'm gonna bookmark you so I won't forget and can keep looking for your stuff. So keep writting!!! |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Pompous on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:50:16 AM AEST
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| to be honest long poems aren't really my thing but this one had me reeled in from the start to finish...im glad it was long coz then it would've been too short and i would've been asking for more...awesome poem |
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Re: Beautiful
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:43:12 AM AEST
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| Your effort definitely paid off. I was captivated throughout the poem. I was totally smitten by your words. Amazing write. |
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Re: Beautiful
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by THUGPASSION on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:07:35 AM AEST
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| I LOVE THIS ONE I FEEL DA SAME WAY BOUT SUM1 GREAT WRITE-SARAH |
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Re: Beautiful
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by DirtyFool on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:11:14 PM AEST
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WOW!! this poems is amazing. You truly have talent. I get tears in my eyes just reading it. It was well worth a day to write. thanx for sharing this poem.
much love,
liz |
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