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Luminous Eyes
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:29:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Thy luminous eyes
Reflect the pale moonshadow
Twinkling with thy tears
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2004-03-22 20:29:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Luminous Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:03:24 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful!!!
"YOUR" would have been better than The.. but that's just my opinion.....
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