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Your hell is my Paradise
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 06:32:39 PM in AEST
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Hand me an other marshmallow
For I am surrounded by the warmth of a fire
The pitchfork dude itches my back
MMM the marshmallow is toasted just right
Sit back and cuddle with my George
Watching the fire all around us
To you this may be hell
But it is my paradise
The fire doesnt burn
The fire doesnt hurt
George protects me from all the hurt
He grins down at me
It isnt burning him either
I pull him close and our lips brush each other
To you this may be hell
But it is my paradise
Hand me another marshmallow
Before the fire goes out
George lightly touches me as the fire enrages again
This fire will never go out
As long as George is by my side
To you this might seem like hell
But to me its my paradise
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Re: Your hell is my Paradise
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:28:38 PM AEST
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| *sniffle* i miss this sort of life, you're so damn lucky! this is beautiful, beyond compare... |
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Re: Your hell is my Paradise
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:32:40 PM AEST
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| i dont really understand why it would b hell.. ??.. but im glad it is your paradise.. good work!! |
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Re: Your hell is my Paradise
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:46:13 PM AEST
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| Such a beautiful write. Love is in the air. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Your hell is my Paradise
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:04:32 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write lil angel.... I'm with Remy on this one. |
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Re: Your hell is my Paradise
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:10:27 PM AEST
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simply beautiful. i really liked this.
Arden |
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