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crying in your sleep
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:30:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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crying in your sleep
your self conscious awakens me
just in time to hear the hysterics of your weep
the last dreamy sigh
then you surround the room with your cry
gone again is the peace
the peace so very deep that once was inside of me
every vulnerability exposed
as I hear you my child loose control
to wake you seems so fair
just so you open your eyes from despair
but I cannot move
my body lays so still
as I hear you cry
the energy I once had I cannot find
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loopylou
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2004-04-27 05:30:46]
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Re: crying in your sleep
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:35:12 AM AEST
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So sad, that feeling of inability... It sometimes devours you and chokes you like a heavy blanket...
I can relate...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: crying in your sleep
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by THUGPASSION on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:25:04 AM AEST
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| I LOVE THIS POEM GREAT WRITE |
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Re: crying in your sleep
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:28:08 AM AEST
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| This is really c0ol, its really really dark and I can think of a thousand meanings to go with this poem! Excellent Job |
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