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Array ( [sid] => 45663 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Screw Up [time] => 2004-04-30 23:26:54 [hometext] => This poem is about my on/off again boyfriend. we broke up because i am a SCREW UP. i think we're back together now, but i'm not shure! [bodytext] => Screw Up
Once again, I’ve done something wrong
Now another boy wants me gone
I wish I knew how to do things right
Then I wouldn’t be sitting here alone on this cold, lonely night
But I’ll get him back, I’ll make him mine
I’ll do whatever I have to do, I’ll beg, plead, and whine
Cause he means a lot to me
It just took this for me to see
I really do care
I really do want him there
He told me I flirted with Pwagen and Zack
Then he said, “I want me stuff back!?
Right then I was thinking, “Oh my god! This is the end!?
At least he didn’t use that stupid line “I still want to be your friend?
He didn’t say anything for awhile
I wanted to make him laugh, at least smile
But I couldn’t, at this point, he hated me
I was my face he didn’t want to see
It was me he despised
It was me who told him lies
I hurt that boy
More than a little boy crashes his toys
I want to tell that boy how sorry I am
I want to let him know how lucky I am to have him as my man
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 2 [informant] => BaByBaNaNa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Screw Up

Contributed by BaByBaNaNa on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:26:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Screw Up
Once again, I’ve done something wrong
Now another boy wants me gone
I wish I knew how to do things right
Then I wouldn’t be sitting here alone on this cold, lonely night
But I’ll get him back, I’ll make him mine
I’ll do whatever I have to do, I’ll beg, plead, and whine
Cause he means a lot to me
It just took this for me to see
I really do care
I really do want him there
He told me I flirted with Pwagen and Zack
Then he said, “I want me stuff back!?
Right then I was thinking, “Oh my god! This is the end!?
At least he didn’t use that stupid line “I still want to be your friend?
He didn’t say anything for awhile
I wanted to make him laugh, at least smile
But I couldn’t, at this point, he hated me
I was my face he didn’t want to see
It was me he despised
It was me who told him lies
I hurt that boy
More than a little boy crashes his toys
I want to tell that boy how sorry I am
I want to let him know how lucky I am to have him as my man




Copyright © BaByBaNaNa ... [ 2004-04-30 23:26:54]
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Re: Screw Up (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:44:23 AM AEST
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This is really good! Great job! Just remember to comment on other peoples poems!




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