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Infinite Affection
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:53:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Let's forget about our sorrow,
and let's run away into tomorrow
Let's run away into my special dream
Where the trees are green,
and the flowers pretty
It's said that love does not come easy
We can prove it wrong, just come with me
We'd dissapear into the moonlight,
where we could laugh and dance all night
We'd make the thunder turn to silence
Our love would replace the lightning's violence
The stars would burn with an extra brightness
And smile down upon our rightness
Love would adopt us as it's own
And watch us over 'til ours was grown
We could live without fear of drowning,
inside of eachothers frowning
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
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2004-05-01 13:53:58]
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by creed on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:06:50 PM AEST
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| that was...amazing..i really liked it. |
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:27:04 PM AEST
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I think I just melted.
Wow that was a good poem.
It was just flawless, beautiful, flowing and so blissful.
Kie |
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:29:18 PM AEST
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| excelente. nice writing. |
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by morelikelyrics on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:43:28 AM AEST
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this was truly, Infinite Affection...
only if life was as so sweet to lay upon each and everyone of us, such wonderful moments...
I think that this write is one to be very proud of, as well as one for each to cherish and remember...
~Morelikelyrics
Ideas they wash you while beliefs they stain
If the current gets too peaceful you can count on the waves again |
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by arden on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:33:39 PM AEST
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wow this was simply amazing!!!
i am in love with this poem.
sooo well written.
wow awesome work.
keep up the great work youve got alot of talent.
Arden |
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:55:32 PM AEST
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| this is very good. I know what you are talking about here. I feel the same way towards my wife. You did a very good job keep up the good work. |
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Re: Infinite Affection
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by Faddy on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:56:52 AM AEST
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| this peom is true poetry, beautiful in every sence. You've captured the emotions of love, great job. Keep up the fantastic work! |
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