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WHY?

Contributed by unlovedoneA on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



as i stare into the emptiless despare of cyberspace i start to wonder what she was feeling right now if anything was happening to her that i could help with if she was in danger... if she was thinking about me...then i felt something fall down my cheek when i thought of the next thought... why would she care enought to think about me??? she just left me in a cold deep world why would she think of me when she didnt want to be with me why would she ever care for me when she hurts me so bad why? why do i love her so much to where i cant let go? why is she the poison that i need , the air i breath, the life i yern for? why do i need her? why cant i survive without her?? why do i have all these emotions? how could she just leave me there on a deadline with no one to love but her...then i relized all the blood coming from my wrist... why wont it stop? theres alot it wont stop!! STOP! why does my life live with a big dispare of torture? my eyes were getting heavier as more and more of the pain filled blood left my body everything is starting to get blury where am I?...as i started to fall into a deep sleep all i thought was"Oh I love her with everything left of my broken heart that only one thing could fix not my mom not anything but my favorite thing in the world and that was her....."




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Re: WHY? (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:05:41 PM AEST
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that was really good. u must hav really cared for her and i'm sorry that that happened to you. if u ever need someone to talk to i'm here to talk.
~allyson~


Re: WHY? (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:16:24 PM AEST
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I thought that was really good. I think a lot of people can definitely relate to that.




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