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38
Contributed by
stateofgray
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:13:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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38 -Every other kiss, a joke
Every other smile, brings a sullen thought
Every other girl, is relative to nothing
All the other kisses were empty
All my returning smiles, were fakes
And all the other girls I met since meant nothing.
Sometimes Ive closed my eyes in a kiss, To lie
Wishing that I were kissing you.
Sometimes Ive smiled pretending
That I was looking at your face,
But then I realized you were not there,
and all I could do was close my eyes againand pretend.
Sometimes Ive hoped every new girl
I meet, can break me free from you, but no matter whatthey cant
At this point:
I KNOW that when I open my eyes In the middle of a kiss
I couldnt lie to myself anymore, It isnt you Im kissing.
I KNOW that when Im smiling At all the other girls
They cant bring my soul to light,
As you did when you seemed to smile al day.
I realize all this, and I KNOW, I could never compare a rocks to the sun.
I KNOW that I was difficult at times.
I was a little slick at times. Yeah okay
But everywhere Ive looked; Everyone Ive met;
Every kiss I gave , every name I forget
Seemed to be a reminder
Of everything that could have been,
but had to end,
Its all come Back To You, cause i never had to pretend ....
you lit my life, and made me smile
cause you were the one
I could never forget you, unless you tell me
you wanted to forget me too.
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Re: 38
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:00:47 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling and love your write because it is so true to it. I'd offer advise but I haven't found anything to do with the lingering memories except to transcribe them as you have already done.... and done well. Your write leaves me aching and that's just about right, I think. |
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Re: 38
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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this is a great poem. most people that have ever loved will remember at sometime or another that they still love a person they were with but realize they can't have them anymore. thanx this helped with a situation i had.
Lina
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Re: 38
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by bluedragonfly on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:10:53 PM AEST
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| Wow! very well writen. curious about why it's called 38. |
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