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Suiting Hate
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:38:00 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Suiting Hate
I hate you
I never knew you
Yet I can't stop hating you
You'll never know
How I feel
You don't know who I am
It's only suiting
You should love me
Your own flesh and blood
But you were repulsed by me
Left in such a hurry
Never said good-bye to me
I'm sorry you feel that way
That you couldn't love me
That you just had to leave
For other better things
That having a daughter
Wasn't good enough for you
That having obligation
Was too much for you
That being a failure
Took so much out of you
I hate you
And I don't even know you
I know you know how I feel
You feel the same for me
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essentially9
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2004-06-06 23:38:00]
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Re: Suiting Hate
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:26:32 AM AEST
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Very strong emotional write. Very well done.
The Voice
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Re: Suiting Hate
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by afterdark on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:40:21 PM AEST
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| There is no way in Hell anyone could question your power as a poet..Your cold and strong fisted ways of writing is one I admire.I love how you express this poem with your words..What a mind.. |
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Re: Suiting Hate
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by visualizing_life on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:54:46 PM AEST
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very strong message and i really like it i understand exactly where ur coming from...
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Re: Suiting Hate
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:10:03 PM AEST
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I feel the power of your hate in this one....Jen..your poems being old or new are always something to read..thank you
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