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Questions!
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:12:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Here I am once again
pondering my reality
pondering my morality
living a life I wish not to live.
I stand looking out upon tomorrow,
glancing back to forever
how did I come to be
and were shall I end up
I raise my fist to the heavens
demanding upon whatever
please help
make me feel better
remove this weight from my chest
I am only 16
why must you put me through such a test?
why cant I be normal like all the rest?
well ***** you!
I will not conform!
if I go to hell
I wont care!
at least Ill be warm!
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2004-06-07 00:12:47]
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Re: Questions!
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 09:40:53 PM AEST
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loved how it started out, loved it even more how it ended.
this was a powerful write, one of which i throughly enjoyed. i loved these two lines:
I stand looking out upon tomorrow,
glancing back to forever
a very great write.
well done.
keep it up.
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