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untitled
Contributed by
betty
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
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my hands bound blind folded and gagged tied to this bed of subjugation
I writhe in vain freedom is only an illusion dangling in front of me
his footsteps getting closer he speaks my name in his voice passionate contempt my savior my captor his breath my bare skin
Fantasies rush in like the tide guided by the moon full and beautiful my bare breasts
Dissatisfaction swirls inside me the rope burns my wrists
my soft skin his hands strong soothing cold release me from these restraints
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-06-14 15:24:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by full_blur on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:53:01 PM AEST (User
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the imagery you use here is amazing and captivating! keep up the good work! |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by aernby on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:26:58 AM AEST (User
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this is a very evocative piece. It is a little wordy, IMHO, and would benefit from a careful rewrite.
still, this is well done ... |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:15:40 PM AEST (User
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I liked the imagery and this is another good one, I like all of your writing so far and will continue to read more. Keep up the good work, you have talent!
~Kris~ |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:31:34 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed this one...very descriptive keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:03:32 PM AEST (User
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great wording and discription. Nice work. |
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