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It's not Always Self-inflicted
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This isnt your conscious.
Im more powerful than that.
Im a terrible,
evil creature
Who wants your soul back.
I need you to die.
I shall collect your soul when you are through.
You see,
Ive been watching
and your time is over-due.
Finding your way
has become too tough.
Im sure by now
youve had enough.
Pick up the pistol,
come on now!
There is no reason
for you to prowl.
Youll never meet
your one true love.
Youll never see
the stars above.
Just end it now!
Im not trying to be rude.
This is my job.
Im here to help you.
You wont get what you want out of life.
You know you hate it.
The only way out
is for you to die.
So just please just take it!
You wont feel pain,
this is a promise,
just swallow some pills,
youll just drift away,
Honest!
Im watching you now.
Youve taken my advice.
Finally!
Youve lost.
Youve just committed suicide.
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acidicblasphemy
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2004-08-06 18:45:06]
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Re: It's not Always Self-inflicted
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by savedbydeath on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 07:32:17 PM AEST
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~WOW~i really like this poem,it shows power in 1 and another,it also shows emotional personal completements,great write keep up the good work,u showed take a look at my poems
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Re: It's not Always Self-inflicted
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by Alina on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 07:45:08 PM AEST
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This poem made me imagine that it was the "Devil" or drugs in your mind talking to you and telling you to commit suicide. Wonderful Write!!
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Re: It's not Always Self-inflicted
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:32:48 PM AEST
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| Hmmm, nice poem. The rhymes really worked. I hear the voices all the time. I know, life's a *****, trust me i do. Just try and block the voice out. Even if you don't believe it, just try to ignore it. Or tell it to go away. Great job. |
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