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forbidden words
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 09:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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they exist in my mind
somewhere
I don't know how to form them
to explain it to you
to make you see
how I feel
the tip of my tongue
right there
but I cant
they aren't available
they cant be spoken
forbidden to the ears
longing to say
to you this feeling
to tell you
of this fire
this desire
this grip you hold on me
to see you smile
hear you giggle
oh how you tempt me
I try not to slip
or show to much
cant let you see
cant let it out
caressing in my mind
the skin of the untouchable angel
silken treasure
I peer into your stained glass soul
through your mesmorizing windows
but I don't see me...
im not aloud in
and I know this
but this longing remains
it comes and fades in waves
some days it unbearable
to not know your touch
to not share the words
so I admire from afar
such a precious goddess
humble in your ways
I only hope that someone
takes the time every single day
to tell you just how beautiful you are
and I hope you know
that you are amazing to me...
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
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2004-08-06 21:42:06]
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Re: forbidden words
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by HellsLibrarian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:23:45 PM AEST
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This was beautiful. I hope that one day you get to say those forbidden words, and let her know how you feel.
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Re: forbidden words
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by lilyofthevalley on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:33:21 PM AEST
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| Sweet and charming piece of work. |
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Re: forbidden words
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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I liked this holder you have held a place in my heart for your work...you should feel special....keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: forbidden words
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:27:11 PM AEST
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Mesmerizing Holder.......a great emotional poem.......sort of a lovely symphony.....waiting for the Crescendo......and then ending with a lovely melody.........of lost tones. Great Work.
love
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Re: forbidden words
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by arden on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:06:33 PM AEST
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it was breath taking and so sweet.
beautifully expressed with such emotion and feel.
this was a great poem.
well done. keep up the amazing work.
Arden |
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Re: forbidden words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:59:02 PM AEST
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| This was wonderful. You could replace some of the mispelled words perhaps, but the words were perfect! Nice loving write. Cheers! |
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