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Duality
Contributed by
Starfriend
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:31:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Outside it's stopped raining
But where the rain ended
My tears continue
Outside the sun is shining
But inside me, the sky grows darker
Distant clouds came so near
Outside is a perfect day
Within me there's a storm
My emotional tsunami
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Starfriend
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2004-08-21 09:31:34]
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Re: Duality
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:22:00 AM AEST
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SHORT BUT EFFECTIVE!
and very, very POWERFUL too.
you're not alone. we are feel this some times. |
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Re: Duality
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:29:21 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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