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Array ( [sid] => 61072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still [time] => 2004-08-22 22:43:51 [hometext] => Time has passed and I return to put thoughts to paper. [bodytext] => Its getting Cold Outside
And I know, You are out there somewhere.

I can feel your chill, in my bones.
And yet, we are apart .
I can still smell you ...
and close my eyes and
feel your touch .

But
Your out there
and I am in here .
Warm, Much Loved and Safe.

How sad that We can not be as equal
with out any one getting hurt.
Oh, how we tired ,
I still remember, what prehap should have never been.

But still I wonder
If just at that moment, you first said those words
and I them to you .
Did we really know how committed
I would be to you after such a long time ago?

Through all the Highs and Lows of life -we helped each other .
You lost control and I regained mine.
Yet still
I have ,it seems like Forever,
helped you along .

Still in the quiet of the darkest nights
and the happiest of moments I have now
I still Wonder How you are.
Not as Lovers any longer, but just simply as Friends.

I still have that warm and fuzzy feeling
when ever you come near .
But as time will have it ,
Its all been kept in Check.

But still somehow
I feel how Cold You are
And I watch and wonder ...Where you are out there.
Still


Whisper [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Still

Contributed by Whisper on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:43:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Its getting Cold Outside
And I know, You are out there somewhere.

I can feel your chill, in my bones.
And yet, we are apart .
I can still smell you ...
and close my eyes and
feel your touch .

But
Your out there
and I am in here .
Warm, Much Loved and Safe.

How sad that We can not be as equal
with out any one getting hurt.
Oh, how we tired ,
I still remember, what prehap should have never been.

But still I wonder
If just at that moment, you first said those words
and I them to you .
Did we really know how committed
I would be to you after such a long time ago?

Through all the Highs and Lows of life -we helped each other .
You lost control and I regained mine.
Yet still
I have ,it seems like Forever,
helped you along .

Still in the quiet of the darkest nights
and the happiest of moments I have now
I still Wonder How you are.
Not as Lovers any longer, but just simply as Friends.

I still have that warm and fuzzy feeling
when ever you come near .
But as time will have it ,
Its all been kept in Check.

But still somehow
I feel how Cold You are
And I watch and wonder ...Where you are out there.
Still


Whisper




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Re: Still (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:55:24 AM AEST
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Whisper this is an excellent poem, and gave me goosebumps! If you felt the cold....then it's not love but a possession. Stay away, turn away...have nothing more to do with them, they will suck you in, and destroy you if given half the chance!!
This is an excellent poem!
And thankyou so much for your fine comments on my poems. They are deeply appreciated!
Lovingcritters
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