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Breaking Up

Contributed by StoneAngel on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I went to bed
My troubles followed me there
I went to sleep
My troubles followed me in my dreams
I dreamt of my bf waiting for me
In the dream I asked for my stuff,
I left his house and said good bye
I had to leave him, he didn''t know why
I told him many times but he didn''t listen
He ignored me because he had no money
I told him, "you can do a lot without it"
He didn't listen

He fought with his mom
So I couldn't see him
He wouldn't let me over
But I needed my stuff

He used me for money,
He didn't care about me, not really
He became jealous of me
That I had a job, he didn't
He has no common sense
And no manners, I had to teach him

We were on separate paths
Ours did not meet
It felt like we were looking at each other
From across a bridge
I felt like I was pushing at the bars
Trying to get close to him
But he only used me
He took advantage of my kindness

I wish I could dump him
But he doesn't want to see me
He doesn't care how my weeks go
He only cares about himself,
Using me, manipulate me

He's just like the rest
Who use and abuse me
Not really caring about how I feel
Telling me it has to be this way or that

Well I'm sick and tired of it
I thought the answer was to give up
But it's not, so I'm fighting
I WONT OBEY
I can't obey
I'm sick of being USED
NO MORE

Oh By the way,
I'm dumping you





Copyright © StoneAngel ... [ 2004-10-22 15:46:05]
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Re: Breaking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:18:55 PM AEST
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Ha! suckz for him! anyone who manipulates you,you should definatly NOT be with. I feel bad for this guy...then again, your probably a bit sweeter then i am to ppl when they ***** me off and use me. I am really nice when people are nice to me, but when someone messes with my friends, or messes with me...I am not so nice anymore. =) lolz

~ Younger yet Older


Re: Breaking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:26:57 PM AEST
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great write.


Re: Breaking Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:33:59 PM AEST
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you go girl!! this poem is oozing with confidence... do ya need help kickin' his butt?
if so I'm so there...lol... yeah anyome who inspires something like this is a total jerk you deserve so much better than that...




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