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Wonderful Mysteries
Contributed by
Twitch06
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Wonderful mysteries happen all the time
Your heart beats outragiously
You look into his eyes
And see a whole new adventure to be awaited
Talking all night just about anything that crosses your mind
Laying closely to each other
Feeling each others heart beat
There is no other wonderful feeling like this
Cause it feels like a beautiful bliss
His gental kiss runs through my vains
His gental touch makes me get chills of comfort
And his gental words make me believe in me
This wonderful mystery was exciting
And I want to experience it again
Copyright ©
Twitch06
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2004-10-24 19:04:23]
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Re: Wonderful Mysteries
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:52:15 PM AEST
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| It's a lovely write..just one tiny thing. A few spelling errors..i.e. gentle..for gental; veins for vains.. Some mistakes in grammer too..if you want to know you can pm me..if not I'll just butt out.. |
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Re: Wonderful Mysteries
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by Starlilly on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:38:56 PM AEST
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Great writing ~
I know this feeling |
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