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Array ( [sid] => 69470 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams come true [time] => 2004-10-30 16:41:29 [hometext] => I wish they did, because if only they did, I would be happy forever [bodytext] => If I could have my dreams come true
These are the things I'd like to do.
To have a cabin deep in the woods,
And someone to share both the bad and the good.

We'd lie by the fireplace,forever it seems,
And share with each other our future of dreams.
As we tire of talking,we'd snuggle up close,
These are the times, I'd cherish the most.

The times when I feel so close to someone,
Who gives me such pleasure and so much fun.
Who isn't afraid of what the future may bring,
And share so much love, that our hearts sing.

Sometimes I wonder will my dreams come true?
And I ask myself, could it be with you?
I don't have the answer, atleast not to share,
I'm afraid if I share them, you wouldn't care.

So, until the time comes, when the timing is right,
I'll cherish our time everyday and night.
And if in the future, our dreams become one,
Then I'll know that my dreams has only begun.

To have you beside me, through the rough seas and good,
I know we'd make magic, I'm sure that we could.
For you are my soul mate, I believe in my heart,
And to get to our dreams, we must first make a start.

So, please take my hand, and don't be afraid,
I believe that together, our cabin will be made.
I'll never doubt my feelings for you,
And if you return them, all our dreams can come true. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LIving_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Dreams come true

Contributed by LIving_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:41:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



If I could have my dreams come true
These are the things I'd like to do.
To have a cabin deep in the woods,
And someone to share both the bad and the good.

We'd lie by the fireplace,forever it seems,
And share with each other our future of dreams.
As we tire of talking,we'd snuggle up close,
These are the times, I'd cherish the most.

The times when I feel so close to someone,
Who gives me such pleasure and so much fun.
Who isn't afraid of what the future may bring,
And share so much love, that our hearts sing.

Sometimes I wonder will my dreams come true?
And I ask myself, could it be with you?
I don't have the answer, atleast not to share,
I'm afraid if I share them, you wouldn't care.

So, until the time comes, when the timing is right,
I'll cherish our time everyday and night.
And if in the future, our dreams become one,
Then I'll know that my dreams has only begun.

To have you beside me, through the rough seas and good,
I know we'd make magic, I'm sure that we could.
For you are my soul mate, I believe in my heart,
And to get to our dreams, we must first make a start.

So, please take my hand, and don't be afraid,
I believe that together, our cabin will be made.
I'll never doubt my feelings for you,
And if you return them, all our dreams can come true.




Copyright © LIving_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-10-30 16:41:29]
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Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:47:32 PM AEST
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A very beautiful poem...nice job here

Mason


Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:02:56 PM AEST
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"I'm afraid If I share them You wouldn't care~.."

that line really struck me.. wow.


Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:55:39 PM AEST
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Another really beautiful write...i love the rhythm...it flows really well...keep writing...

xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx


Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:55:41 AM AEST
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Awsome poem, writen nicely to perfection.

Hugs,
Jane


Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by light on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:18:35 AM AEST
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Outstanding poem Dani. I especially luv any poem about nature, luv and dreams. Sorry I only rate it a 4/5 although its definately worth a 5 howeva no poem is perfect. I only did it out of honor. Ya a great poet have ya considered contributing ya poems to www.poetry.com. Ya might be chosen as the poet of the year therefore win cash and be globally recognised as a great poet. I believe ya have a great chance of winning. I really believe in ya gift.

DREAMZ, PEACE, LIGHT & LUV ETERNALLY

From Lighten (Len)


Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:19:56 PM AEST
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Geesh, Dani - you're as hopeless as I am. LOL!

Honestly, I mean that as a compliment. Obviously, you are a dreamer, a romantic. This is a lovely expression of wishes, of hoping. I enjoyed this.

The line "To have you beside me, through the rough seas and good" struck me as slightly awkward. ending with simply "the bad and the good" there might help the flow a tad. I do hope you don't mind me suggesting as much.

Keep writing... I think many will enjoy your work
SNM


Re: Dreams come true (User Rating: 1 )
by Trippflip on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:22:15 PM AEST
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sounds like some sort of greeting card...




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