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Abortion
Contributed by
thegurl
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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But she always loved him...
Afraid of him and his power
a possession of hers was he
dangerous so dangerous
he would ruin it all
oh but his little hands
he was so powerful but still
very defenseless from it all
she had to protect him -no no
he would destroy it all everything
it had to be done today
tomorrow would be too late
he had to die, just had to
so much blood there was so much
stop no don’t kill him please don’t
It’s been done and now it’s over
No what have I done my baby
You killed him you--no murderer
I was afraid I didn’t know
BUT I ALWAYS LOVED HIM.
Copyright ©
thegurl
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2004-11-04 23:12:57]
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Re: Abortion
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:22:41 PM AEST
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A very powerfull write that jus might save a baby's life.
Keep up the awesome writing.
It's very sad but sometimes that's what it takes.
Very well said.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Abortion
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by girish on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:32:20 AM AEST
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dear friend,
good write, good expression, but an afterthought. You should have remembered the say "God proposes, Man disposes"
You have disposed but is that what god proposed? It`s very sad.
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Re: Abortion
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:10:50 AM AEST
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a very sad and powerful write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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