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Lost
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:46:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So full of decadence
deeply distraught
lost on my own path
retracing all my old steps
There's no ending to my trails
Just barries and forks along the way
I don't know where to go
I'd scream for help but
I'm all alone
Silence consumes the land
Snow paints this darkened path
so cold..
I want to go home
so cold..
I just need your embrace
No one's here
No one wants to find me
No one even knows to try
Help Me..
Save me before I find myself
I'm going in circles
my memory relapses
Why is it so cold?
I'm surrounded by darkness
I see the light fading
I miss being able to breathe..
Copyright ©
PsychoticDreamz
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2004-11-04 23:46:07]
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Re: Lost
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:51:57 PM AEST
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A masterpeice full with power and truth.
Keep getting bored 'cause this is good stuff.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Lost
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:08:29 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it!!!!! |
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Re: Lost
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:07:31 AM AEST
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an amazing dark write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Lost
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:29:23 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and dark, vsiual and intense an awesome poem. |
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