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The Journey
Contributed by
avanottingham
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:04:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Though it may seem
We've been lost in the rain
Dissolved and taken
By droplets of pain
We still are loved
And we still are whole
We still are admired
For the strength of our soul
And though our paths
May be deserted
From the lies of the past
And our devotion exerted
We still go on
Day by day
Struggling sometimes
But finding our way
Our love made a pact
To bring us together again
By reuniting our paths
To go the journey as friends
Copyright ©
avanottingham
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2004-11-05 04:04:22]
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Re: The Journey
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 05:42:56 AM AEST
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a very nice write about friendship,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Journey
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:19:25 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, with rythem and composed with tenderness, giving true meaning to friendship, awesome poem. |
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Re: The Journey
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:56:03 PM AEST
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i loved this, especially
We still are admired
For the strength of our soul
Great Job, keep it up! :) |
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