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The Oak Tree
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:57:46 AM in AEST
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Old Oak Tree ~~~~ When I was young There was this old oak tree In our front yard Big as could be Its limbs seemed to reach Up to the sky During Hide-go-seek Its where I would hide
But over the years It seemed to lean too far Towards the house And towards dads car Then one-day dad said It had to go All it would take Is one good blow
He looked at mom And said it all could be gone It could take the house The car, the barn So they made a plan To cut it down This old oak tree In this tired old town
I remember the day Its fresh in my mind The last day on that tree I would ever climb When daddy cut it down I never thought he would How important it was to me I thought he understood
I watched as it laid On the ground In thousands of pieces It could be found A little heart As small as mine Was caught up in This sad time
Days when by And maybe a few years Time seemed to dry All my tears But to this day I still miss that tree And all the memories That use to be
Now on that spot Twenty years later Stands a new oak tree The Lord did favor It grew up big Bold and true Just like the old oak tree I once knew
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Re: The Oak Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:33:53 AM AEST (User
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oh jeff, great write! when i was a kid i used to hang upside down for hours everyday from an enormous willow tree, when my grandfather, who i lived with, cut it down i cried and cried, he said something was wrong with it but to me it was as beautiful as ever, that spot for me will never be the same, i wonder do all poets have a tree a*poetree*, i always thought so, now on this property i bought and now live on, we have the biggest oak tree i ever saw, and i will never let anyone cut it down:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Oak Tree
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:55:28 PM AEST (User
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Oh Jeff..this is an awesome write... Brought back great memories for me also.....
Please give Christian a hug and kiss for me..
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