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I KILLED HER I GUESS

Contributed by LEMMEN on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:02:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



So many thoughts.
So many people.
So many words.

So little help, I can give.
So little faith, I have in myself now

I tried to save the world and,
I could not ever save her.

I'm tired,
I'm tired now.

A life lost,
I'd tried to help,
I'd tried to tell her someone did care
because I do.
I do care.

She could not hear me.
She could not see me.

SHE DIED.

She will no longer be online.

I saw her screen name today.
It was her mom.
She told me she died.
She said I was to blame.
Because I was a cutter and she died that way.

Now I wish I could die
TODAY.

She was only sixteen, Still a baby.
I tried to help.
I tried to tell her cutting
wasn't the way.
I tried to tell her someone dose
care.
Because I do.

I sent her my poems.
I made her a part of a world,
I thought.

Her mom said I killed her.
Maybe I should just kill myself.

I tried to save the world and couldn't
even save her.

So many thoughts.
So many people.
So many words.

And I could not even help her.

Her mom reported me to A O L,
For killing her daughter.

Maybe I did kill her for not being
able to help more.
I GUESS.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN




Copyright © LEMMEN ... [ 2004-11-13 09:02:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I KILLED HER I GUESS (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:07:16 AM AEST
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Oh my goodness this is so sad.... My deepest apologies, you must be so confused right. now! If you want to talk....


Re: I KILLED HER I GUESS (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:34:31 AM AEST
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very deep and sorrowful poem....well written I must say


Re: I KILLED HER I GUESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:01:22 PM AEST
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Judging by this...I think it was the poems that did it.


Re: I KILLED HER I GUESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:17:09 PM AEST
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:-(


Re: I KILLED HER I GUESS (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:17:19 PM AEST
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oh my, that is sad, well written *big hugs*




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