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My Star Has Gone

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:57:06 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I would say that my star has gone,
Cant remember the last time it shone,
I stare up into the sky late at night,
Still holding onto my dreams so tight.

For years I wished upon my little star,
That it would take me somewhere far,
But here I am at twenty-two,
In the same place & feeling blue.

I close my eyes to see if I can see,
That little star that means so much to me,
But this time it has gone into hiding,
As no longer can I see it shining.

Please little star I need you so,
Tell me why you had to leave me & go,
What did I do to deserve all this?
You really dont know how much I miss.

I need you to grant me all me wishes,
My bleeding heart has run out of kisses,
I want to lay my head down & rest,
In your bright glow I long to be dressed




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-11-13 11:57:06]
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Re: My Star Has Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:19:39 PM AEST
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But here I am at twenty-two,
In the same place & feeling blue.
So young and full of dispair...gawd Im 34 a good reason to dispair....
I hope your star shines bright once again...keeping the shadows at bay...and bringing the warmth of joy back in to your heart and life...peace to you my friend and always take care

Karl


Re: My Star Has Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:28:07 PM AEST
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Once again you deliver very well...Good poem..


Re: My Star Has Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:03:14 PM AEST
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Awww Sweetie..at 22 you have your whole life ahead of you.....it's not like you're 48 lol...
Your star will shine again soon...you'll see....
Great write...as always...
Hugs and love
Jenni


Re: My Star Has Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 02:36:59 PM AEST
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I believe in you Pixie and I believe you have alot of talent as a writer and composer of poetry.

I think your star is shining brighter than ever you just can't see it, but I can.

Keep on writing and may it help you thru the troubled times.

Kie


Re: My Star Has Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:18:05 PM AEST
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i really liked this one..deep deep poem here




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