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Naked I Lay

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 01:45:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



In this life naked I lay,
Vulnerable & right in harms way,
Unprotected from the harsh world,
I feel & look just like a little girl.

I have nowhere to run & hide,
I am shaking & very frightened inside,
I am surrounded by demons & ghosts,
A poison pen letter waits in my post.

Naked I lay like a new born babe,
Feeling the force of the vicious tirade,
Stripped bare of love & caring,
In my eyes all my fears are staring.

I reach out in search of some cover,
For the comfort of the arms of a lover,
But alone I am so very alone,
All thats around is loneliness dulcet tone.

I lay there curled up in a ball so tight,
My fear always seems to get worse at night,
My body shivers as I wallow in my tears,
I curl up even tighter as the terrors come near.








Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-11-13 13:45:58]
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Re: Naked I Lay (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitolyn on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:18:36 PM AEST
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i thought the poem was written well.
i could envision everything.
good job!


Re: Naked I Lay (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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Awwww..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Naked I Lay (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:41:34 PM AEST
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oh hun i wish i could cheer you up, theres a lot of sunshine outside here right now, so im sending it to you:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Naked I Lay (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:07:16 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry...
This is such a well written poem. All of the emotions are expressed with so much talent and sincerity. When a poem causes you to feel at least a fraction of the emotions the poet did when contriving it, you know its a good poem.


Re: Naked I Lay (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 10:15:03 PM AEST
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Such saddness in your flow,well written.
And remember,you are not alone.

SecretWind......


Re: Naked I Lay (User Rating: 1 )
by jonteD on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:41:47 PM AEST
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Cry not, just keep writing.




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